原帖由 onlyaaaa 於 2008-3-31 20:46 發表 
HI dear DYE~
i want you to promise me that all what we said is just discuss .and that wont break our friendship OK?
first ,i never say that Communist party done very well.
what i said is"it`s hard for him to do things to become what like is now." and i alsosaid that
the Communist party really did something that was wrong andhurt the people as well the country.
YES~we have so many traditional culture.we have reasourses.
but U know the quality of the coal found in the mainland?
our teacher give us a funnystory:
你们应该知道中国的官僚主义吧。只注重数据而不注重实际过程中的问题。有次有官员去宝钢集团参观。要求提高钢的成品合格率和提高更多的煤的燃烧热值，并拿出国外的相关数据来比较。结果宝钢的一位工程师当场就进行反驳：人家国外的锅炉吃的什么煤，我们这里吃的是什么煤。人家天天吃的好煤，我们今天吃澳大利亚的煤，明天吃南美的煤，后天是平西的煤，再后天吃窑洞的煤。
we just talk about the heating duringthe burning will make at that lesson.
but i take this example is justwant to say:
YEAH~we looks like have many .
but U know how the precentageof the coal in the stone(矿石）.most coal we have is low quality.
1 KW/Hpower need about 60g coal(foreign coal) but more about 80g(our coal).
and as i know we dont seems like have many oil(油田)we need 西气东输工程。
when i was in middle high school
the geogrefic bookwriten"中国有960万平方公里，幅员辽阔，“地大物博”".
now more and more professor suggestthat detlete the word "地大物博"
cause it take a wrong cenexpt(概念）.
and it"brainwash " many chinese time and time(一代代）.
#1.
really very sorry 4 lateness in replying here , due-to being extremely////extremly busy in
meeting my own various deadlines of net projects ,
please
accept my sincere apologisations , sorry cheers ThANKye
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i never say that Communist party done very well.
i never say that Communist party has////have done very well.
[[[[[ the ,,,,,have'''' here is in sense of the grammar of the reported speech ]]]]
[[[[[ first , please nourish up a habit : : to write nothing but just only 1.000% correct english ]]]]
[[[[[ ,,,,,1.000'''' e.t.c. in continental europe = ,,,,,1,000'''' e.t.c. in english speaking area ]]]]
,;--^))
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what i said is"it`s hard for him to do things to become what like is now."
better to be rewritten as
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what i said is
"it`s hard for them to do things to bring our motherland up to its current prosperity ." """""""""
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party really did something that was wrong andhurt the people as well the country.
party really did something that was wrong andhurted the people as well as the country.
[[[[[ ,,,,,,,,, as well as ''''''''' being instead of ,,,,,,,,,,and''''''''' @here , mmmmmmmmm 
great !!
great english language usage !!  ]]]]]]]]]
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we have reasourses.
we have reasources.
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but U know the quality of the coal found in the mainland?
but do you know the quality of the coal found in the mainland?
[[[[[ i'm aware of fact of that thou hast known :: there should be a place for the ,,,,,do'''' here ]]]]
[[[[[ but ]]]]
[[[[[ first , please nourish up a habit : : to write nothing but just only 1.000% correct english ]]]]
[[[[[ i.e. , please nourish up a habit : : to render out only the best practices ]]]]
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our teacher give us a funnystory:
our teacher gave us a funnystory:
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we just talk about the heating duringthe burning will make at that lesson.
we just talked about the heating duringthe burning which would be made at that lesson.
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but i take this example is justwant to say:
but i took this example out to just intend to say:
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YEAH~we looks like have many .
YEAH~we look like have many .
[[[[[ i.e. the ,,,,,look'''' here must b with out 'the ending ,,,,,s'''' ]]]]
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but U know how the precentageof the coal in the stone(矿石）.
but do you know : : how high is the percentageof the real coal contained in the raw stone (矿石）.?
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most coal we have is low quality.
most coal////coals we have are of low quality.
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1 KW/Hpower need about 60g coal(foreign coal)
[[[[[ somewhat right grammar ]]]]
[[[[[ but ]]]]
[[[[[
a native english language speaker would express in this format : ::::::::::
it takes about 60g of foreign coal to get 1 KW/Hpower ]]]]
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but more about 80g(our coal).
[[[[[
a native english language speaker would express in this format : ::::::::::
it takes more , about 80g of our coal to get the same 1 KW/Hpower ]]]]
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we dont seems like have many oil(油田)
we dont seem to have many oil(油田)
[[[[[
the ,,,,,seem'''' here must be infinitive , i.e. with out any grammaticcal////grammatical marker
]]]]] ]]]]] ]]]]] ]]]]] ]]]]] ]]]]]
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when i was in middle high school the geogrefic bookwriten
when i was in middle high school the geography bookwas written as
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now more and more professor suggestthat detlete the word "地大物博"
now more and more professors suggestto delete the word "地大物博"
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cause it take a wrong cenexpt(概念）.
because it took////takes out a wrong concept (概念）.
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and it"brainwash " many chinese time and time(一代代）.
and it"brainwash " many chinese people from generations to generations (一代代）.
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sorry4inconveniency
sorry for any inconveniency
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p.s. : :::::::::: more in comin' , coming up
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